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How do you make time for your family?

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Each of my families lives busy.
We have individual space at home.
We try to have dinner together after work and we talk about many things while eating.
For example, what happened, thought, and feeling and so on.
Eating dinner together means more than eating to my family.
Even though each of us is busy, we try to share time for each other.

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Hi Lily,
Thank you for your ideas!
Have a nice morning and talk to you later!
Teacher Elly.
How do you make time for your family?
Each of my families lives busy.
>>Each of my family member has a busy lifestyle.
or>>My whole family is quite busy.
We have individual space at home.
CORRECT!
or>>We give each other their individual space at home.
We try to have dinner together after work and we talk about many things while eating.
CORRECT!
or>>We make time to have dinner together after work and we talk about different topics during the meal.
For example, what happened, thought, and feeling and so on.
>>For example, we talk about the day's events, our thoughts and feelings, and so on.
Eating dinner together means more than eating to my family.
>>Having dinner together means more than eating to my family.
Even though each of us is busy, we try to share time for each other.
>>Even though, each of us is busy, we try to spend time with each other.
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