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I have been working in industrial automation for 16 years. My job are developing programs, supporting customers and teaching engineers. As I said, I know how to control electricity and developing programs. Some engineers want to get advice from me, when they start a new project. I have been supporting a customer from last summer. He isn't familiar a system that I supply into Korean market from Germany. The customer and I spent hard summer to finish the project. Finally the customer succeeded the project. While I was supporting him, he wanted to hire me. And he said to me, "Just being beside me, you motivate me.". At that time, I was proud myself.
But I couldn't enter his company. Because he was my boss. At that time, I didn't like him.

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I have been working in industrial automation for 16 years.
>> I have been working in Industrial Automation for 16 years.

 My job are developing programs, supporting customers and teaching engineers.
>>  Correct. 

 As I said, I know how to control electricity and developing programs.
>>  As I said, I know how to control electricity and develop programs.

 Some engineers want to get advice from me, when they start a new project. 
>>  Some Engineers want to get advice from me when they start a new project. 

I have been supporting a customer from last summer. 
>> I have been supporting a customer since last summer. 

He isn't familiar a system that I supply into Korean market from Germany.
>> He isn't familiar with a system that I supplied into the Korean market. It was from Germany.

 The customer and I spent hard summer to finish the project.
>> The customer and I spent a hard summer finishing the project.

 Finally the customer succeeded the project. While I was supporting him, he wanted to hire me.
>>  Finally, the customer succeeded in the project. While I was supporting him, he wanted to hire me.

 And he said to me, "Just being beside me, you motivate me.". At that time, I was proud myself.
>>  And he said to me, "Just being beside me, you motivate me.". At that time, I was proud of myself.

But I couldn't enter his company. Because he was my boss. At that time, I didn't like him.
>> But I couldn't enter his company. Because he was to become my boss. At that time, I didn't like him.

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