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I think Korean birthday tradition is not too much different with other cultures.
But one of Korean unique birthday traditions is eating seaweed soup.
originally, the seaweed soup is for mothers because they hope that they can bear their children smoothly like seaweed.

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Hi Jun, thank you for sharing this. Have a great day ahead!
Jasmin

I think Korean birthday tradition is not too much different with other cultures.
>> I think Korean birthday traditions are almost the same with other countries. 
But one of Korean unique birthday traditions is eating seaweed soup.
>> But one of the unique birthday traditions in Korea is you need to eat seaweed soup on your birthday. 
originally, the seaweed soup is for mothers because they hope that they can bear their children smoothly like seaweed.
>>The seaweed soup represents women who wants to be a mother and hope to bear a child without difficulty.
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