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Q:Why is important to know our history?
A:Knowing our history is important.
First, we can get hope when our country is in danger.
Second, we can learn many things in our history so it is important.
Last, it's better important when our history is not changed.

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Hello Paul! Nice job with your homework!

~Teacher Sheila


Knowing our history is important.
>>CORRECT

First, we can get hope when our country is in danger.
>>First, we can get hopes when our country is in danger.

Second, we can learn many things in our history so it is important.
>>Second, we can learn many things from our history so it is important. 

Last, it's better important when our history is not changed.
>>Last, it's better and important if our history is not changed.
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