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As the saying, "Everything comes back to me," if I do well and treat others well, they will do me well, and I can ask for help when I'm in trouble or in a difficult situation, because I've been good to them, even if they don't want to help, they come to help me by thinking, "But Maria did good to me in the past". It was a long time ago, and when I was in a kindergarten in the United States, all the other children were American, but I was young and Korean, so I wasn't adjust well in the kindergarden. This kindergarden have to bring a lunch box at home to eat lunch. One day, at the lunch time, the amount of my lunch box was too much for me. So I told Christina, a girl who hadn't said a word yet, I said: "There are too many lunch boxes. Would you like to eat it together?", in a clumsy pronunciation, and Christina understood and said, "yes!" she said. When I first heard this story, I thought this way. “Sharing it may be the best opportunity to make each other a better relationship”.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Maria!

This is a wonderful story of sharing and caring. It is true that what you do to others will definitely be back to you. So always have courage and be kind.

Thank you for sending me this composition, I really enjoyed reading it!

-T. Donna =)

As the saying, "Everything comes back to me," if I do well and treat others well, they will do me well, and I can ask for help when I'm in trouble or in a difficult situation, because I've been good to them, even if they don't want to help, they come to help me by thinking, "But Maria did good to me in the past". 
>> As the saying goes, "Everything comes back to me." If I do well and treat others well, they will do me well, and I can ask for help when I'm in trouble or in a difficult situation, because I've been good to them, even if they don't want to help, they come to help me by thinking, "But Maria did good to me in the past". 

It was a long time ago, and when I was in a kindergarten in the United States, all the other children were American, but I was young and Korean, so I wasn't adjust well in the kindergarden. 
>> It was a long time ago, and when I was in a kindergarten in the United States, all the other children were Americans but I was young and Korean, so I wasn't adjusted well in the kindergarten. 

This kindergarden have to bring a lunch box at home to eat lunch. 
>> This kindergarten has to bring a lunch box from home to eat lunch. 

One day, at the lunch time, the amount of my lunch box was too much for me. 
>> One day, at lunch time, the amount of my lunch box was too much for me. 

So I told Christina, a girl who hadn't said a word yet, I said: "There are too many lunch boxes. 
>> So I told Christina, a girl who hadn't said a word yet, "There is too much in my lunch boxes."

Would you like to eat it together?", in a clumsy pronunciation, and Christina understood and said, "yes!" she said. 
>> Would you like to eat it together?", in a clumsy pronunciation, and Christina understood and said, "Yes!". 

When I first heard this story, I thought this way. “Sharing it may be the best opportunity to make each other a better relationship”.
>> When I first heard this story, I thought this way. “Sharing it may be the best opportunity to make a better relationship”.
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