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What can you say about cat-calling? Do you think women are the only victims?

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I think that catcalling is absolutely an unwanted communication. Catcalling happens in any city and any country, it happens in the suburbs and on the campuses. It happens to women and man. But most victims are more severe in the women than man. Because the man cannot feel a dangerous situations. But most women feel a scared situations when they walk alone.

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Hi Sir Mandeep! Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Here are some of the corrections, but other than that, you really did great. I admire how you concretely expressed your opinions and ideas. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

I think that catcalling is absolutely an unwanted communication. 
>> CORRECT!

Catcalling happens in any city and any country, it happens in the suburbs and on the campuses. 
>> CORRECT!

It happens to women and man. 
>> It happens to women and men, but women are usually the victims

But most victims are more severe in the women than man. 
>> It happens to women and men, but women are usually the victims

Because the man cannot feel a dangerous situations. 
>> Men cannot feel any danger in some situations, but women often feel scared in most situations when they walk alone.

But most women feel a scared situations when they walk alone.
>> Men cannot feel any danger in some situations, but women often feel scared in most situations when they walk alone.

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