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What are your daily routines?

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1. What are your daily routines?
My daily routines are different according to a day of the week. I get up early in the morning. I generally go to the library to read the
books and study English from 10 am to 3 pm. I walk along Han river for around two hours to stay healthy at 4 pm. and I watch TV
before I go to bed.
2. Why is it advisable to follow a strict schedule?
Following a strict schedule is necessary to exercise regularly and steadily. So we should go to gym and advise how to work out.

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Hi Huje,
Thank you so much for today's homework!
Please keep up the good work!
Talk to you later!
Teacher Elly.
What are your daily routines?
1. What are your daily routines?
My daily routines are different according to a day of the week. 
>>My daily routines are different according to the day of the week. 
I get up early in the morning. 
CORRECT!
or>>I wake up in the morning at a very early time. 
I generally go to the library to read the books and study English from 10 am to 3 pm. 
>>I generally go to the library to read books and study English from 10 a.m. to 3 p.m. 
I walk along Han river for around two hours to stay healthy at 4 p.m. 
CORRECT!
or>>I walk along Han river at 4 p.m. for a couple of hours to stay healthy. 
And I watch TV before I go to bed.
CORRECT!
or>>And before I go to sleep, I watch some programs on TV.
2. Why is it advisable to follow a strict schedule?
Following a strict schedule is necessary to exercise regularly and steadily. 
CORRECT!
or>>Following a strict schedule is necessary in order to be able to exercise regularly and steadily.
So we should go to gym and advise how to work out.
>>So we should go to the gym so we can get some advise on how to work out.
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