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I would say Jeju do the most exciting city in Korea because of its uniqueness. It is located on the southernmost island of the Korean peninsula. First of all, there is a unique dialect that differs a lot from other cities in Korea. Many Korean say it is challenging to comprehend the way Jeju people talk. Alongside this, the food differs from many other cities in Korea. There are many fish and vegetables only available in Jeju due to climate conditions, so many dishes are cooked from these ingredients. For instance, there are skewers made by sharks. Therefore, many gourmets gather on the island to try out delicious cuisine. Most importantly, there is much unique vegetation only available in the city. It is an only city in Korea that palm tree grows.

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Hello, Mun Ka Hyeon! I'm glad that you answered the homework. I hope you had fun! :)
- Teacher Sophia 
I would say Jeju do the most exciting city in Korea because of its uniqueness.
>> Jeju is the most exciting city in Korea because it is unique.
It is located on the southernmost island of the Korean peninsula. 
>> It is located in the southernmost island of the Korean peninsula.
First of all, there is a unique dialect that differs a lot from other cities in Korea. 
>> First of all, Jeju has a unique dialect that makes it different from other cities in Korea.
Many Korean say it is challenging to comprehend the way Jeju people talk. 
>> Many Korean say that it is challenging to comprehend the way people from Jeju island talk. 
Alongside this, the food differs from many other cities in Korea. 
>> Correct
There are many fish and vegetables only available in Jeju due to climate conditions, so many dishes are cooked from these ingredients. 
>> Jeju is the most exciting city in Korea because it is unique.
For instance, there are skewers made by sharks. 
>> For instance, there are skewers made for shark meat.
Therefore, many gourmets gather on the island to try out delicious cuisine. 
>> Correct
Most importantly, there is much unique vegetation only available in the city. 
>> Most importantly, there are so much vegetables available only in the city.
It is an only city in Korea that palm tree grows.
>> It is the only city in Korea where palm tree grows. 
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