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The disadvantages and environmental problems of car ownership outweigh the benefits.
If we have car we can drive everywhere.
But traffic problems are increasing.
And there's less space for parking.
Also, the environment is polluted by exhaust fumes.
So, it is not good to own too many people.

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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
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The disadvantages and environmental problems of car ownership outweigh the benefits.
>>> CORRECT
If we have a car we can drive everywhere.
>>> CORRECT
But traffic problems are increasing.
>>> CORRECT
And there's less space for parking.
>>> CORRECT
Also, the environment is polluted by exhaust fumes.
>>> CORRECT
So, it is not good to own too many cars.
>>> CORRECT
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