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I think the greatest thing the leader should have is chear the team and understand the mistake that team made.
Chearing the team can lead to make more kindness.So team will be more passionately and the team will do much more great then last time.
If leader understand the mistake of team, the team member will not be heartache. And also team will be power up more then least time.
That's the reason why I think leader should have chear the team and understand the mistake of team.

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Thank you for this Jed.

I think the greatest thing the leader should have is chear the team and understand the mistake that team made.
>>>  I think the greatest thing the leader should have is chearing the team and understanding the mistake that team made.   
Chearing the team can lead to make more kindness.So team will be more passionately and the team will do much more great then last time.
>>>  Cheering the team can lead to creating more kindness so the team will be more passionate and will do much much better than the last time.   
If leader understand the mistake of team, the team member will not be heartache. And also team will be power up more then least time.
>>>  If the leader understands the mistake of the team, the team members will not be heartbroken. Also, the team will be more energetic than before.   
That's the reason why I think leader should have chear the team and understand the mistake of team.
>>>  That's the reason why I think leader should cheer the team and understand the mistake of team.   
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