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Why is it important to greet someone?

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I think the most important thing that determines someone's image is the first impression, and greeting is the best way to make good impression. We usually start talking by greeting. When we meet familiar people like friends, greeting can be one way to express our affection. It is also good for icebreaking. Our conversation would be stiff without greeting.

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Hello, Jeong Hyo Won! I'm glad that you answered the homework. See you on our next class! :)
- Teacher Sophia

I think the most important thing that determines someone's image is the first impression, and greeting is the best way to make good impression. 
>> I think, first impression is important, and greeting is the best way to make a good impression,
We usually start talking by greeting.
>> We usually start a conversation by greeting first.
When we meet familiar people like friends, greeting can be one way to express our affection. 
>> When we meet familiar people, like our friends, greeting can be a way to express our affection. 
It is also good for icebreaking. 
>> Correct
Our conversation would be stiff without greeting.
>> Our conversation would be stiff without a greeting.
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