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It will be about our happy or sad things or things we like to do and where we like to go .
and the story will picturs and words and the picturses will be colorful too.
It will last about 4~5 chapters it can be short .



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Hello Ruby,
Oh that would be a nice read. I am excited to read the stories you will be writing when you decide to be a writer someday! ^ ^
-Rachel
It will be about our happy or sad things or things we like to do and where we like to go .
>> It will be about our happy and sad memories or the things we like to do or where we like to go.
and the story will picturs and words and the picturses will be colorful too.
>> And the story will be filled with colorful pictures and nice words.
It will last about 4~5 chapters it can be short .
>> It will be about 4-5 chapters long or it can be shorter.
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