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I think rudeness is not a problem, but a dimension of personality.
The nature of people who are rude is selfish and unilateral.
Rude people don't think of anyone else but only think of themselves.
So these people make us very angry, tired and irritated.
I was taught from my parents how to consider others first.
Therefore I try to not to be rude to others.

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Hi Eun Ha!
You are on a roll!
You just keep getting better and better.
I hope you stay diligent and active.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think rudeness is not a problem, but a dimension of personality.
>> Correct
The nature of people who are rude is selfish and unilateral.
>> Correct
Rude people don't think of anyone else but only think of themselves.
>> Rude people don't think of anyone else but they only think of themselves.
So these people make us very angry, tired and irritated.
>> Correct
I was taught from my parents how to consider others first.
>> I was taught by my parents to consider others first.
Therefore I try to not to be rude to others.
>> Correct
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