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As time have changed, people these days have changed their minds.
There were fewer contacts because of different stereotypes and ideas.
They can't communicate well because they have different ideas.
So, young people avoid talking to older people.
If they understand each other's different and consider each other, they can have more contact.

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FANTASTIC DAY TO YOU EDEN~! ^^
Yes, I know some days are more difficult than others. But if you program your mind in a positive way, you won't have to drag through certain days just hoping to get to end the weekday so you can finally enjoy life.
Learn to enjoy your every day~! 
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
As time have changed, people these days have changed their minds.
>>> CORRECT
There were fewer contacts because of different stereotypes and ideas.
>>> CORRECT
They can't communicate well because they have different ideas.
>>> CORRECT
So, young people avoid talking to older people.
>>> CORRECT
If they understand each other's different and consider each other, they can have more contact.
>>> If they understand each other's differences and consider each other, they can have a better relationship. 
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