¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÌ*¾Æ
2021-04-15 490

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Encourage a children to leave as soon as he or she becomes an adult is to be able to quickly become independent.
But they think that children should stay at their parent's home for as long as possible because parents are worried about their's children becoming adults.
It is good to independent quickly, but it ia bad to be independent too quickly.
And it is better to stay with their's parents for a while.
Because if they stay for a long time, they will prevent the children's independence.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

FANTASTIC DAY TO YOU EDEN~! ^^
Yes, I know some days are more difficult than others. But if you program your mind in a positive way, you won't have to drag through certain days just hoping to get to end the weekday so you can finally enjoy life.
Learn to enjoy your every day~! 
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Encourage a children to leave as soon as he or she becomes an adult is to be able to quickly become independent.
>>> Encouraging children to leave home as soon as he or she becomes an adult is to be able to help them to quickly become independent.
But they think that children should stay at their parent's home for as long as possible because parents are worried about their's children becoming adults.
>>> But they think that children should stay at their parent's home as long as possible because parents are worried about their children while becoming adults.
It is good to independent quickly, but it ia bad to be independent too quickly.
>>> It is good to be independent as soon as possible, but it is bad to be independent too quickly.
And it is better to stay with their's parents for a while.
>>> And it is better to stay with their parents for a while.
Because if they stay for a long time, they will prevent the children's independence.
>>> CORRECT
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
107383 I prefer the combination of them in workplaces. ±è*¿Â ¿Ï·á 2021-04-11 644
107382 My worst and best trips ever. ±è*¿Â ¿Ï·á 2021-04-11 508
107381 Which do you think is a better form of communication? Texting or... ±è*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-11 399
107380 Are the words arrogance and confidence the same? Tell me your... ±è*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-11 909
107379 Speaking of scents or smell; What are you going to do if the... ±è*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-11 658
107378 In your opinion, what are the reasons why there is a continuous... ±è*±¹ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-10 402
107377 5Verbs Àü*¼± ¿Ï·á 2021-04-10 552
107376 more women over 40 have babies À¯*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-04-10 1
107375 homework ¹Ú*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2021-04-10 5
107374 What can you say about cat-calling? Do you think women are the... ±è*±¹ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-10 534
107373 correction ±Ç*½Ã ¿Ï·á 2021-04-10 1
107372 Task ÀÌ*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-10 608
107371 What skill do you want to learn in the future and why? ±è*¿­ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-09 552
107370 My opinion about physical education in school ±è*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2021-04-09 521
107369 Homework (259) ¹Ú*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-09 572
107368 If you were a musical instrument, what would you be and why? Ȳ*Á¶ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-09 406
107367 [04/08]Homework ¹Ú*¹ü ¿Ï·á 2021-04-09 1
107366 : The favorite topic for new acquaintances in Britain is the... ±è*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-09 1
107365 grammar ¼Õ*¸² ¿Ï·á 2021-04-09 341
107364 Employees tend to remain with a company until some force causes... À¯*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-09 2

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04