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It recommend as kind and interesting people
>>> It suggests that you are a kind and interesting person.   
Raising a pet is hard but some one raising a pet pretty good it mines he loves animal and loving animal min to me he is very kind.
>>> Raising a pet is hard but someone raising a pet pretty well means he loves animals and loving animals to me means he is very kind.  
Raising pet is very interesting. 
>>>  Raising a pet is very interesting.  
What animal it does not mind. 
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That's the reason what rising a pet mines to me
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