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What is the best memory you have in school when you were still studying?

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The most enjoy memory when I was a student was playing soccer with my friend in the playground. When I was in school, I had lunch time for an hour and a half after the 4th period. Then I remember playing soccer with my friends. And after school, children gathered at school and played soccer in the evening. I think soccer was one of the most interesting memories.

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Hi Steve! School days have a lot memories that we can cherish in a lifetime. That's usually the time where you would meet the people that would have a big role in your life. It's nice that you still remember a part of it:). Make more memories that you can look back at in the future. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. Soon!

The most enjoy memory when I was a student was playing soccer with my friend in the playground. 
>> The most enjoyable memory I had when I was a student was playing soccer with my friend at the playground. 

When I was in school, I had lunch time for an hour and a half after the 4th period. 
>> CORRECT

Then I remember playing soccer with my friends. 
>> CORRECT

And after school, children gathered at school and played soccer in the evening. 
>> CORRECT

I think soccer was one of the most interesting memories.
>> I think playing soccer is one of the most interesting memories I had when I was still studying. 
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