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What is the best memory you have in school when you were still studying? Tell me about it.

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when I was high school student, I bet score game with my friends. the game was who get the highest score in middle test. we bet each 20000won. the number of participant is five. so if I got first, I got 6. I did do my best for middle test. I won second. so I got 30000won!! I wanted to be first but I was satisfied. that moment was that what I did my best in entire life.

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Hi John! School days have a lot memories that we can cherish in a lifetime. That's usually the time where you would meet the people that would have a big role in your life. It's nice that you still remember a part of it:). Make more memories that you can look back at in the future. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

when I was high school student, I bet score game with my friends. 
>> When I was in high school, I played a bet with my friends. 

the game was who get the highest score in middle test. 
>> The winner will be the one who gets the highest score in the midterm test. 

we bet each 20000won. 
>> Each one bet 20,000 won. 

the number of participant is five. 
>> There were 5 paticipants. 

so if I got first, I got 6. I did do my best for middle test. 
>> So if I got it first, I will get 6. I did my best every time we had the test. 

I won second. so I got 30000won!! I wanted to be first but I was satisfied. 
>> I won the second time so I got 30,000 won. I wanted to be the first one but I was still satisfied. 

that moment was that what I did my best in entire life.
>> That moment was that best in my life. 
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