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Is homeschooling an effective method of education? Why or why not?

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hmm... If I get the chance to homeschooling for my kids, I don't do this. because they can't meet new friends. so they'll probably lack social skills. also homeschooling is more expensive than school fee. so I don't think that homeschooling is an effective method.

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Hi Tobby! Yes, there are a lot of benefits when you go to school to study. You would learn how to socialize and be aware of what is like. You would be exposed to a lot of things and learn from it. Some children need to undergo home schooling because of special reasons. Some are sick, disabilities etc. Although they wouldn't learn as much as in school. Either way, if the educators are good enough, children can still learn from both. 

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hmm... If I get the chance to homeschooling for my kids, I don't do this.
>> If I had the chance to have my kids homeschooled, I won't do it because they won't be able to meet new friends. 

 because they can't meet new friends. 
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE. 

so they'll probably lack social skills. 
>> They'll probably lack social skills. 

also homeschooling is more expensive than school fee. 
>> Also, homeschooling is more expensive than school fees. 

so I don't think that homeschooling is an effective method.
>> That's why i don't think that homeschooling is an effective method. 
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