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My favorite fictional character

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His name is Hyuk, Kang. He has a well-build body. His hair color is black, and he has long silky hair. When the wind blows, his hair is blowing in the wind, too. His sharp nose makes him to look a western person. But He is a Korean, His parents also. His brown skin tells that he loves outside sports. He has big hands as like tray but the hands are always moisturizing and warm even in winter. If he grasps a girl's hands in winter. The girl will melt down with happiness. His baritone voice is enough to make women falling in love at him. He is a diligent student.

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His name is Hyuk, Kang.
>> Correct.

 He has a well-build body. 
>>  He has a well-built body. 

His hair color is black, and he has long silky hair.
>> His hair color is black, and he has long silky hair.

  When the wind blows, his hair is blowing in the wind, too.
>>   When the wind blows, his hair blows with the wind, too.

His sharp nose makes him to look a western person.
>>  His sharp nose makes him look like a western person.

But He is a Korean, His parents also. His brown skin tells that he loves outside sports.
>>His parents are both Koreans, therefore, he is also Korean. His brown skin tells that he loves outside sports.

 He has big hands as like tray but the hands are always moisturizing and warm even in winter.
>>  He has big hands but it is always moisturized and warm even in winter.

  If he grasps a girl's hands in winter. The girl will melt down with happiness. 
>>   If he grasps a girl's hands during winter, the girl will meltdown with happiness. 

 His baritone voice is enough to make women falling in love at him. 
>>  His baritone voice is enough to make women fall in love with him. 

 He is a diligent student.
>> Correct.

 
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