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Q:What is the most important lesson your parents taught you?
A:"Above the walking one is the flying one."is the most important lesson that my parents taught me.
First, it means there is someone that is higher then me so don't be arrogance.
Second, I think it's most important lesson in Korea because many people are arrogance.
Last, I think it's the most important lesson because most people don't like someone is arrogance.

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Hello Paul! I had a great time reading your homework for the last time! Thank you for always doing it!

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"Above the walking one is the flying one."is the most important lesson that my parents taught me.
>>CORRECT

First, it means there is someone that is higher then me so don't be arrogance.
>>First, it means that there is someone that is higher than me so I shouldn't be arrogant.

Second, I think it's most important lesson in Korea because many people are arrogance.
>>Second, I think it's the most important lesson in Korea because many people are arrogant.

Last, I think it's the most important lesson because most people don't like someone is arrogance.
>>Last, I think it's the most important lesson because most people don't like someone who is arrogant.
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