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Hiking is good at our mental health.

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The benefits of hiking is that you can see many natural environments. In addition, hiking can take away a lot of stress. Just looking at the sea it's like a mountain seems to be an open place. Last time I went with my family on the mountain, it was full of trees, but it felt very fresh. I learned in science class that trees do photosynthesis, absorbs carbon dioxide and exhales oxygen, so this is why hiking also has the benefits of making people feel good.
P.S. The picture is just in the Naver.

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Hi there Maria!

They say that nature heals. I think it is true because all the natural elements in nature like the plants and the animals provide us food and medicine. Also, nature has a great way of making us feel as if we are also a part of it. So we need to take care of it and respect it too.

Thanks for the pretty picture and for the very good composition!

Until next week!

-T. Donna =)

The benefits of hiking is that you can see many natural environments. 
>> The benefits of hiking is that you can see the natural environment. 

In addition, hiking can take away a lot of stress. 
>> Correct!

Just looking at the sea it's like a mountain seems to be an open place. 
>> Just looking at the sea, the mountain seems to be an open place. 

Last time I went with my family on the mountain, it was full of trees, but it felt very fresh. 
>> Correct!

I learned in science class that trees do photosynthesis, absorbs carbon dioxide and exhales oxygen, so this is why hiking also has the benefits of making people feel good.
>> Correct!

P.S. The picture is just in the Naver.
>> P.S. The picture is from Naver.
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