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Is homeschooling an effective method of education? Why or why not?

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Is homeschooling an effective method of education? Why or why not?

It depends on who it is.
I think that it is important to the learning at school something like Social Community.
Homeschooling and going school have good and bad points.
It is up to choose thier the medthod of eduction.

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Hi Monica! Yes, there are a lot of benefits when you go to school to study. You would learn how to socialize and be aware of what is like. You would be exposed to a lot of things and learn from it. Some children need to undergo home schooling because of special reasons. Some are sick, have disabilities etc. Although they wouldn't learn as much as in school. Either way, if the educators are good enough, children can still learn from both. 

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It depends on who it is.
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I think that it is important to the learning at school something like Social Community.
>> I think that it is important to learn in school especially when it comes to socializing. 

Homeschooling and going school have good and bad points.
>> CORRECT

It is up to choose thier the medthod of eduction.
>> It is up to them to choose what method of education they would pick. 
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