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Do you believe that first impressions last?

작성자: 박*경
2021-04-19 491

회원님의 영작문

Well, I suppose, most of the time, it would be reasonable. Although I don't want to have some bias about some people, as I am getting older there are a lot of cases that first impression was right. I mean, when it comes to judgement someone I consider his or her facial expression and speak rather than their clothes or appearance. And it lasts for a long time. That's why I like people who are humourous and kind.

Donna, I have a question. As you know, I was studying IELTS but I have been not confident since I got 6.0 many times. Do you think it is possible to me to get 7.0 in speak?

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there Jane!

First of all, thanks for sharing your thoughts about first impressions. I agree that at times, it can be tricky. Nonetheless, as kind human beings that we are, we give them a second thought.

For your question, there is nothing impossible. You can absolutely achieve 7 when you start working had now. If you want, we can study IELTS, let's talk about it in class.

See you soon!

-T. Donna -)

Well, I suppose, most of the time, it would be reasonable.
>> Well, I suppose most of the time, it would be reasonable.

Although I don't want to have some bias about some people, as I am getting older there are a lot of cases that first impression was right. 
>> Correct!

I mean, when it comes to judgement someone I consider his or her facial expression and speak rather than their clothes or appearance. 
>> I mean, when it comes to judgement towards someone, I consider his or her facial expression and speak rather than their clothes or appearance. 

And it lasts for a long time. That's why I like people who are humourous and kind.
>> Correct!
Or: humorous (SPELLING)

Donna, I have a question. As you know, I was studying IELTS but I have been not confident since I got 6.0 many times. 
>> Correct!

Do you think it is possible to me to get 7.0 in speak?
>> Do you think it is possible for me to get a 7.0 in speaking?
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