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- What is your favorite food?

There are 4 favorite foods. First one is pizza because it's good. 2nd one is banana because it's sweet. 3rd one is hamburger because
it's delicious. 4th one is chicken because it's very sweet.

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Hi Geonha! Thank you for taking time in answering the question. Here are some of the corrections, but other than that, you really did great. :) Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

- What is your favorite food?
>> CORRECT!

There are 4 favorite foods. 
>> I like four different foods.
or >> There are four foods that I like.

First one is pizza because it's good.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The first one is pizza, because it's good.

2nd one is banana because it's sweet.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The second one is banana, because it's sweet.

3rd one is hamburger because it's delicious. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The third one is hamburger, because it's delicious. 

4th one is chicken because it's very sweet.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The last one is chicken, because it's very sweet.

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