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when do you think time flies so fast?

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When I see my two daughters is growing, I feel that time flies so fast.
I don't recognize how 20 years have passed so fast.
The older daughter is living alone in apan, While she entered to college.
The younger daughter has plan to go to university to syudy in the England.
Before one knows, my husband and I are a middle-agede couple.
When I heard my age, I am so surprised.

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Hi Lily,
Thank you for your opinion today!
Have a nice day!
Teacher ELLY
When do you think time flies so fast?
When I see my two daughters is growing, I feel that time flies so fast.
>>When I see my two daughters growing up so quickly, I feel that time flies so fast.
I don't recognize how 20 years have passed so fast.
>>I didn't notice that 20 years have already passed by so fast.
The older daughter is living alone in apan, 
>>My oldest daughter is living alone in Japan, 
While she entered to college.
>>She has already started college.
or>>She is in college right now.
The younger daughter has plan to go to university to syudy in the England.
>>My youngest daughter has a plan to go to university in England.
or>>My youngest daughter is planning to study in a university in England.
Before one knows, my husband and I are a middle-agede couple.
>>Before we even knew it, my husband and I have become just a middle-aged couple.
When I heard my age, I am so surprised.
>>When I realized how hold I am now, it surprised me.
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