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Well, I don't agree. It seems that people realize they had a good/beautiful travel experience after long time passed even if bad situation happened during their traveling. Also, I thought I didn't want to go back my home whenever the end of traveling schedule was getting closer. Thinking back to my younger age, I always stuck with and got stressed with something to do like assignments, club activities, studying major deeply. So, traveling was kind of refreshment from my daily life like treadmill. On the other hand, my traveling expereince maybe left as good/happy memory to me because I had exhausted daily life paradoxically. But now I have nothing to make me stressed as much as I do before, I likely to enjoy my traveling more comfortable. I hope we can travel all the world like before covid-19 situation.

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Well, I don't agree.
>> CORRECT!

It seems that people realize they had a good/beautiful travel experience after long time passed even if bad situation happened during their traveling.
>> It seems that people realize they had a good/beautiful travel experience after a long time had passed even if a bad situation happened during their trip.

Also, I thought I didn't want to go back my home whenever the end of traveling schedule was getting closer.
>> Also, I thought I didn't want to go back home whenever the end of my traveling schedule is getting closer.

Thinking back to my younger age, I always stuck with and got stressed with something to do like assignments, club activities, studying major deeply. 
>> Thinking back to my younger years, I used to always get stress and stuck with something to do like assignments, club activities, studying my major deeply.

So, traveling was kind of refreshment from my daily life like treadmill.
>> So, traveling was a kind of refreshment from my daily life like a treadmill.

On the other hand, my traveling expereince maybe left as good/happy memory to me because I had exhausted daily life paradoxically.
>> On the other hand, my traveling experiences maybe left good and happy memories to me because I had an exhausting daily life paradoxically.

But now I have nothing to make me stressed as much as I do before, I likely to enjoy my traveling more comfortable. 
>> But now that nothing stresses me as much as before, I likely to enjoy my traveling more comfortably. 

I hope we can travel all the world like before covid-19 situation.
>> I hope we can travel around the world like before the covid-19 situation started.
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