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What do you usually do when you are facing a really big problem?

작성자: 박*선
2021-04-21 697

회원님의 영작문

I usually think a lot about the problem, make a decision, and focus on what I decided as soon as possible. Before making a decision, you should figure out what a problem exactly is. I think there are two kinds of problems. One is the problem that you can solve, and the other is that you can't. So, if you can solve the problem, you should do your best to solve the problem without doubt. But, if the problem that you can't solve were in front of you, you should give up and focus on your next goal. Chance is coming back to one who is eagerly waiting for and preparing for the next opportunity. No matter how serious the problem is, a problem is just a problem. We can't let the problem ruin our lives. So, keep focusing on the thing I can do my best.

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Hi Rachel! We all have problems that comes in different sizes. Some are big, some are small. It just depends on how we look at it and solve it :) I think it's very important not to panic and think of a solution calmly. You see problems in a very positive note. Keep it up! I hope you can inspire other people to do the same thing as well. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

I usually think a lot about the problem, make a decision, and focus on what I decided as soon as possible. 
>> CORRECT

Before making a decision, you should figure out what a problem exactly is. 
>> Before making a decision, you should figure out what exactly the problem is. 

I think there are two kinds of problems. 
>>CORRECT

One is the problem that you can solve, and the other is that you can't. 
>> One is the problem that you can solve, and the other is the one that you can't. 

So, if you can solve the problem, you should do your best to solve the problem without doubt. 
>>So, if you can solve the problem, you should do your best to solve the problem without doubt. 

But, if the problem that you can't solve were in front of you, you should give up and focus on your next goal. 
>> But if the you can't solve the problem in front of you, it's okay to give up and focus on your next goal.  

Chance is coming back to one who is eagerly waiting for and preparing for the next opportunity. 
>> Chances come back to those who are eagerly waiting and preparing for their next opportunity. 

No matter how serious the problem is, a problem is just a problem. 
>> No matter how serious it is a problem is just a problem. 

We can't let the problem ruin our lives. So, keep focusing on the thing I can do my best.
>> We shouldn't let it ruin our lives so we should keep focusing on the things that we do best. 
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