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Q:What other mythical creature do you have in Korean literature?
A:There are four mythical creature in korea.
First, there are red bird, blue dragon, black tortoise and, white tiger.
Red bird is a bird that has red feather.
Blue dragon is a dragon that is blue color.
Black tortoise is a tortoise that has a long nack and black shell.
Last, white tiger is a tiger that has white far.

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Hello Paul,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

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Q: What other mythical creature do you have in Korean literature?

A: There are four mythical creature in korea.
>>> There are four mythical creatures in South Korea. 

First, there are red bird, blue dragon, black tortoise and, white tiger.
>>> First, there is the red bird, the blue dragon, the black tortoise and, the white tiger.

Red bird is a bird that has red feather.
>>> The red bird is a bird having a red feather.

Blue dragon is a dragon that is blue color.
>>> The blue dragon is a dragon in blue color. 

Black tortoise is a tortoise that has a long nack and black shell.
>>> The black tortoise is a tortoise that has a long neck and black shell.

Last, white tiger is a tiger that has white far.
>>> Lastly, the white tiger is a tiger with white fur.
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