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My hometown is Daegu and I lived in daegu about eighteen years

As I remember my hometown was just old city which has no special feature.

But todays because of continuous develepment, there are many buildings and apartments.

So we can't find the image of past now

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Hi, Chris!
Thank you for this. ^^

- T. Rina


1. My hometown is Daegu and I lived in daegu about eighteen years
>> My hometown is Daegu and I have lived there for about eighteen years.

2. As I remember my hometown was just old city which has no special feature.
>> As I remember my hometown was just an old city which had no special features.

3. But todays because of continuous develepment, there are many buildings and apartments.
>> But today, because of continuous development, there are many buildings and apartments.

4. So we can't find the image of past now
>> So now, we can't find an image from the past.
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