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I will go to family trip someday!!

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I don't buy anything or spend anywhere with the money I've saved. I have two big piggy banks in my house, the pink one is mine and the blue one is for my younger brother. Both of us have worked hard, so now my prediction seems to be half. My goal is to go on a family trip together after filling the piggy bank to some extent!. I hope someday the day will come when I and my younger brother go on a family trip with this money!!
P.S. That picture is really my piggy bank.

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Hi Maria!

You did a good job earning all these money and putting them in those piggy banks. I think that all children should have piggy banks so that they can learn the value of saving and controlling their money.

Also, I wish all of the plans that you mentioned here on your answer will all come true. But first, you have to wish for COVID 19 to be gone to have a very happy vacation.

Thanks again for writing this answer to my question. A job well done!

-T. Donna =)

I don't buy anything or spend anywhere with the money I've saved. 
>> I don't buy anything or spend anywhere the money I've saved. 

I have two big piggy banks in my house, the pink one is mine and the blue one is for my younger brother. 
>> Correct!

Both of us have worked hard, so now my prediction seems to be half. 
>> Both of us have worked hard, so now my prediction is that it is already half full. 

My goal is to go on a family trip together after filling the piggy bank to some extent!
>> Correct!

I hope someday the day will come when I and my younger brother go on a family trip with this money!!
>> Correct!

P.S. That picture is really my piggy bank.
>> Correct!
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