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About household chores

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When we live in a house, we have to do household chores to keep living. However, almost parents do all of household chores. When children do household chores, the give them some pocket money. I think it is not good. Sometimes, it is okay but we get some pocketmoney everytime they do household chores. Because they are one of family members. So, It is natural to do some household chores. Also, I think that sometime we have to help our parents.

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Hello Arim!

It's nice to read your homework today!^^ Keep on doing a good task.  


-T. Maine   


When we live in a house, we have to do household chores to keep living.

>>Correct!

However, almost parents do all of household chores.

>>However, almost all parents do all of the household chores.

When children do household chores, the give them some pocket money.

>>When children do some household chores, parents give them some pocket money.

I think it is not good.

>>Correct!

Sometimes, it is okay but we get some pocketmoney everytime they do household chores.

>>Sometimes it is okay, but it is not okay when children recieve some pocket money every time they work at home. 

Because they are one of family members.

>>Because they are one of the family members.

So, It is natural to do some household chores.

>>So it is normal to do some household chores.

Also, I think that sometime we have to help our parents.

>>I also think that sometimes we have to help our parents.

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