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What are the things you can do with a computer?
Thesedays I making stock application which use to computer with my team. The computers can to do many things. I think world conneted by online-web. So address of internets starting is world wide web(www). It would be conneting from computer to peoples. The computer's ability is be endless. We have to use it in positively.
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I have any questions. I don't know well about relative pronoun. So I can't make well sentence. Tell me please, How to make good sentence.
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Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

Thesedays I making stock application which use to computer with my team. 
>>These days, I make stock applications which we can use in a computer with my team.

The computers can to do many things.
>>Computers can do many things. 

I think world conneted by online-web.
>>
I think the world is connected by the online-web.

It would be conneting from computer to peoples.
>>We could connect one person to another using a computer. 

The computer's ability is be endless.
>>A computer's ability is endless. 

We have to use it in positively.
>>We have to use it appropriately. 

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I have any questions. I don't know well about relative pronoun. So I can't make well sentence. Tell me please, How to make good sentence.
>> Start with creating simple sentences with 4-5 words first. (including the subject and the verb) This way you can practice simple sentences first before making complicated sentences. ^^
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