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What were your best and worst trips?

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1. What were your best and worst trips?
We had always decided the place to take trip beforehand. My wife and I have been to several countries with our pleasure mind. So I do not particularly remember the worst trip. I think that traveling enjoy seeing the beautiful view, and having delicious food.
2. Where do prefer staying while on vacation?
I will prefer staying in Thailand, if I go on on vacation for a month. I have been to Thailand three times before. It was good to be Thais kindness and food.

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Hi Huje,
Thank you and have a wonderful weekend!
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Teacher Elly.
What were your best and worst trips?
1. What were your best and worst trips?
We had always decided the place to take trip beforehand. 
>>We have always decided on the place where we would like to take a trip beforehand. 
My wife and I have been to several countries with our pleasure mind. 
>>My wife and I have been to several countries for pleasure in mind. 
So I do not particularly remember the worst trip. 
CORRECT!
or>>So I do not remember having a worst trip before. 
I think that traveling enjoy seeing the beautiful view, and having delicious food.
>>I think that traveling helps us enjoy looking at beautiful views and having delicious foods.
2. Where do prefer staying while on vacation?
I will prefer staying in Thailand, if I go on on vacation for a month. 
>>I prefer to stay in Thailand, if I go on a vacation for a month.
I have been to Thailand three times before. 
CORRECT!
or>>I have been to Thailand before, for about three times. 
It was good to be Thais kindness and food.
>>It was good for me to experience the Thais' kindness and eat their delicious food.
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