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I think the best age is 20s, because this age is very free.
The worst age is 19 years old because 19 years old is very difficult to do the exam.

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Hello, Matt! ^^
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I think the best age is 20s, because this age is very free.
>> I think the best age is the 20s because this age is very free.

The worst age is 19 years old because 19 years old is very difficult to do the exam.
>> The worst age is 19 years old because they have to do a lot of exams.
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