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How would you describe a healthy diet?

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The most important thing is to avoid unhealthy food. It includes food that is greasy or sweet. Also, you have to eat appropriate amount of food. It is not good to eat too much or too less. It is also good to eat at a regular time. Especially, you have to avoid eating at night. Our body needs various kinds of nutrients, so try to eat evenly.

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Good morning, Jeong Hyo Won! I'm glad that you answered the homework. See you in the class later! :)
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The most important thing is to avoid unhealthy food. It includes food that is greasy or sweet. 
>> Correct
Also, you have to eat appropriate amount of food. It is not good to eat too much or too less.
>> Correct
It is also good to eat at a regular time. 
>> Correct
Especially, you have to avoid eating at night. 
>> Correct
Our body needs various kinds of nutrients, so try to eat evenly.
>> Our body needs various kinds of nutrients, so try to balance your food.
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