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In my perspective, the perfect man for me has to be similar to me in any aspects.
People are not always the same as others, but they respect each other, and finally, they change a little similar person with their spouse.
I believe it and I want that person as my spouse for my life. Even if he is not perfect man in terms of earning lots of money, being a handsome guy and so on, the most important thing is that he can understand my perspective, emotion and empathize with me.

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Hello Sunny! Great to see you here again.

They say that there isn't a perfect person to love. Yes, when you meet that one, you complement each other making you a perfect match. 

You are young and all the possibilities of meeting a man you truly deserve is so great. So play the best music and always shine in everything that you do. Through this, you will find someone who is just as similar as you.

Thank you for this composition. See you again next week!

-T. Donna =)

In my perspective, the perfect man for me has to be similar to me in any aspects.
>> Correct!

People are not always the same as others, but they respect each other, and finally, they change a little similar person with their spouse.
>> People are not always the same as others, but they respect each other, and finally, they change a little similar with their spouse.

I believe it and I want that person as my spouse for my life. 
>> Correct!

Even if he is not perfect man in terms of earning lots of money, being a handsome guy and so on, the most important thing is that he can understand my perspective, emotion and empathize with me.
>> Correct!
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