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Do you ever wish you could go back in time and be a little kid again? Why yes or why not?

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I have never wanted to go back in time and be a little kid again.
I am satisfied with now a me.
And so I do not want to go to back to a little child.
If I go to back to a little kid, I can not do any sports that I am playing with my friends.
And I can not enjoy with now my friends.
And my parents want to go to back to a little child, but I want to be a grown up.
That's why I do not want to go back in time and be a little child again.

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Hi John! Once in a while. we think about our childhood days. We remember the days when we were worry free, not that much responsibilities and everything was fun. If I was also given the chance, I would like to go back. We also have different perspectives. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

I have never wanted to go back in time and be a little kid again.
>> I never want to go back to the time when I was still a kid. 

I am satisfied with now a me.
>> I am satisfied with my life right now so I don't want to go back.

And so I do not want to go to back to a little child.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE. 

If I go to back to a little kid, I can not do any sports that I am playing with my friends.
>> If I will go back, I can't play sports and play with my friends. 

And I can not enjoy with now my friends.
>> I can't enjoy with the friends that I have now as well. 

And my parents want to go to back to a little child, but I want to be a grown up.
>> My parents also want me to be a little child again but I don't.

That's why I do not want to go back in time and be a little child again.
>> That's why I do not want to go back to the time when I was a kid again.  
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