¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Yes! I have a ghost stories...

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*¶û
2021-04-26 607

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®



It happened when I was a kid, me and my family went on a picnic in a forest. When I was going to the forest that day, I went on foot, so I asked "can you buy me some water?" because I was so thirsty. Then she said "Okay I will buy you some water with your father, don't go anywhere okay?". I said of course I knew, and I was playing with my younger brother, then the sound of the wind was heard in the deep of the woods where the wind was blowing hard. My younger brother said "I want to go there", but I didn't think for some reason, so I just asked to stay. But that's when I hear a sound like "Oh... it's a waste..." in my ears. I was so scared at that time, so I cried there, and then my mom and dad asked what was going on. they must be far away, but when I asked how you heard my cries, my mom said, "Huh? Where have we been?".

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good evening Maria! 

I had a similar experience of a man's cough in front of my face although there was no one in the room. That happened to me when I was on the radio. Sometimes, I always feel like I am with someone in the room. Anyway, ghosts are not real, they say. So how can our experiences be explained? Let's talk about that tomorrow in class.

Thanks for this one, it's very good! Catch you soon.

-T. Donna =)

It happened when I was a kid, me and my family went on a picnic in a forest. 
>> Correct!

When I was going to the forest that day, I went on foot, so I asked "can you buy me some water?" because I was so thirsty. 
>> Correct!

Then she said "Okay I will buy you some water with your father, don't go anywhere okay?".
>> Correct!

I said of course I knew, and I was playing with my younger brother, then the sound of the wind was heard in the deep of the woods where the wind was blowing hard. 
>> Correct!

My younger brother said "I want to go there", but I didn't think for some reason, so I just asked to stay. 
>> Correct!

But that's when I hear a sound like "Oh... it's a waste..." in my ears. 
>> But that's when I heard a sound like "Oh... it's a waste..." in my ears. 

I was so scared at that time, so I cried there, and then my mom and dad asked what was going on.
>> Correct! 

they must be far away, but when I asked how you heard my cries, my mom said, "Huh? Where have we been?".
>> They must have been far away, but when I asked if they heard my cries, and my mom said, "Huh? Where have you been?"
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
107592 work email-2 ±è*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-16 0
107591 Work email-1 ±è*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-16 2
107590 Email (1) ±è*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-16 1
107589 hello. ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-16 545
107588 How did your parents choose your name? ½Å*°æ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-16 805
107587 What do you usually bring when you visit a friend? ¼Û*·É ¿Ï·á 2021-04-16 527
107586 Task ÀÌ*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-16 481
107585 Do you like visiting your friends? Why? ¼Û*·É ¿Ï·á 2021-04-16 526
107584 Where would you like to travel? ±Ç*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-16 541
107583 What was the most interesting thing you have ever seen? ¼Û*·É ¿Ï·á 2021-04-16 525
107582 The stability of a company is uncertain. How will you manage... À¯*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-16 1
107581 If you could change nationality, which other nationality would... ±è*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-16 667
107580 Where do you live? ÇÏ*Á¶ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-16 641
107579 If I go outer space, I want to visit mars. ¼±*¸² ¿Ï·á 2021-04-16 651
107578 Homework º¯*ÈÆ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-16 1
107577 What do you think of all the fad diets that come on the market? ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-15 612
107576 interview q ±Ç*½Ã ¿Ï·á 2021-04-15 0
107575 Assignment º¯*ÈÆ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-15 1
107574 My favorite fictional character ±è*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-15 793
107573 Homework (263) ¹Ú*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-15 561

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04