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Q:What will you do if you see a cute stray dog?
A:I'll bring a cute stray dog to the animal shelter so the dog can live with another people or find the owner.
First, if there is a stray dog then it means someone lost it or the owner don't want to live with it anymore.
Second, if the stray dog live in streets forever then it will be sick or hurt so I'll bring the dog to the animal shelter.
Last, if there are the stray dog then the owner of the dog will want to find the dog so I'll find the owner of the dog.

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Hello Paul,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)


Q: What will you do if you see a cute stray dog?

A: I'll bring a cute stray dog to the animal shelter so the dog can live with another people or find the owner.
>>> I'll bring the cute stray dog to the animal shelter so that the dog can find a family to take care of it or I'll find the owner.

First, if there is a stray dog then it means someone lost it or the owner don't want to live with it anymore.
>>> First, if there is a stray dog then it means someone lost it or the owner doesn't want to live with it anymore.

Second, if the stray dog live in streets forever then it will be sick or hurt so I'll bring the dog to the animal shelter.
>>> Second, if the stray dog lives in the streets forever then it will be sick or it will get hurt so I'll bring the dog to the animal shelter.

Last, if there are the stray dog then the owner of the dog will want to find the dog so I'll find the owner of the dog.
>>> Last, if there is a stray dog then the owner of the dog wants to find the dog so I'll find the owner of the dog and return it to him/her.

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