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A review of a new restaurant.

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2021-04-27 793

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This restaurant is not a new restaurant. The restaurant is located so far from my home. When I go on a business to near the restaurant.
I have visited the restaurant every time. It is a Korean traditional food restaurant. Main menu is catfish stew. Main material of the stew is catfish. It is provided with dried leaves of radish, freshwater crabs and freshwater shrimps. Those minor materials improve the taste. It isn't spice. I had hot stew, but I feel cool after eating all. I think the stew is good for recovering hangover. I love that kind of stew. I have eaten the stew various restaurant. But the restaurant is the best.

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This restaurant is not a new restaurant. 
>> Correct. 

The restaurant is located so far from my home. 
>> Correct. 

When I go on a business to near the restaurant. I have visited the restaurant every time. 
>> When I go on a business near the restaurant, I always make sure to visit there all the time. 

It is a Korean traditional food restaurant. 
>> Correct. 

Main menu is catfish stew.
>> Their main menu is catfish stew.

 Main material of the stew is catfish. 
>> Their main ingredient for the stew is catfish. 

It is provided with dried leaves of radish, freshwater crabs and freshwater shrimps. 
>> It is added with some dried leaves of radish, freshwater crabs, and freshwater shrimps. 

Those minor materials improve the taste. 
>> Those minor ingredients improve the taste. 

It isn't spice. I had hot stew, but I feel cool after eating all.
>> It isn't spicy. I had the hot stew, but I feel cool after eating it all.

 I think the stew is good for recovering hangover.
>>  I think the stew is good for recovering from a hangover.

 I love that kind of stew.
>> Correct.

 I have eaten the stew various restaurant. But the restaurant is the best.
>>  I have eaten the stew at various restaurants but the ones they have here is the best!

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