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Are you afraid of making mistakes? Why or why not?

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I don't know actually but I think some situations, I don't afraid of mistakes, but other situations, I am.
For example, I'm with my classmates and I can decide to do announcement, I don't afraid of mistakes.
But for another example, I'm with people but I don't know them and I have to do announcement, I think I'll be afraid of mistakes.
But just looking my personality, I think I'm not realy afraid of mistakes.
I can do announcement in front of lots of people, and I have lots of experiences about doing mistakes.
When I did mistakes, I was very very ashamed about it, but after few times, it was okay.
So I think we don't have to ashamed about any mistakes, and I think I'm not afraid of mistakes.

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Hi John! Mistakes makes us humans. We can't really control them from not happening in our life. What we can do is learn and reflect from it. It makes us better people. Although, we shouldn't make it a habit to do. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

I don't know actually but I think some situations, I don't afraid of mistakes, but other situations, I am.
>> I don't know exactly but there are some situations that I'm afraid of making mistakes and there are some that I'm not. 

For example, I'm with my classmates and I can decide to do announcement, I don't afraid of mistakes.
>> For example, when I'm with my classmates and make an announcement, I'm not afraid of making mistakes. 

But for another example, I'm with people but I don't know them and I have to do announcement, I think I'll be afraid of mistakes.
>> But when I'm with people that I don't know and I need to make an announcement, I get afraid of making mistakes. 

But just looking my personality, I think I'm not realy afraid of mistakes.
>> By looking at my personality, I think I'm not really afraid of making mistakes. 

I can do announcement in front of lots of people, and I have lots of experiences about doing mistakes.
>>I can do announcements in front many people and gain experiences when I make mistakes. 

When I did mistakes, I was very very ashamed about it, but after few times, it was okay.
>> When I make mistakes, I feel ashamed about it. But after a few times, it goes away. 

So I think we don't have to ashamed about any mistakes, and I think I'm not afraid of mistakes.
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