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I think I have to think about this...

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2021-04-28 942

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Um...Once I entered the theater clup in elementary school and continued for 3 years, but acting didn't become that fast and easy...I still like actors, and I also like watching dramas and movies, so if I try harder, my dream will be change to that way. When I writing this diary, my younger brother telling me that if I only cry within 10 seconds, there is a possibility of learning the actor. So I tried it once but it was difficult even if I tried all the different methods. But when I searched for it, it was so amazing that a certain actor immediately executes it when other actor gives a suggestion such as tears from the right, tears from the left, and tears from both sides. It was amazing. Anyway, I have to think about this...

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Maria!

It takes a lot of guts and confidence not to mention the skills to be able to become a very good actor. I am sure that if you train, you will be able to do it so well but if you want to be a diplomat, well, you have to train for that.

However, it is really very interesting to think about being an actor, I must agree with you.

See you!

-T. Donna =)

Um...Once I entered the theater clup in elementary school and continued for 3 years, but acting didn't become that fast and easy...
>> Once I entered the theater club in elementary school and continued for 3 years, but acting didn't become that fast and easy.

I still like actors, and I also like watching dramas and movies, so if I try harder, my dream will be change to that way. 
>> I still like actors, and I also like watching dramas and movies, so if I try harder, my dream will change that way.  

When I writing this diary, my younger brother telling me that if I only cry within 10 seconds, there is a possibility of learning the actor. 
>> When I write this diary, my younger brother told me that if I only cry within 10 seconds, there is a possibility of learning being an actor. 

So I tried it once but it was difficult even if I tried all the different methods. 
>> Correct!

But when I searched for it, it was so amazing that a certain actor immediately executes it when other actor gives a suggestion such as tears from the right, tears from the left, and tears from both sides. It was amazing. 
>> Correct!

Anyway, I have to think about this...
>> Correct!
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