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HOMEWORK: What techniques do you use to remember English vocabulary? Which part of learning English

작성자: 김*성
2021-04-30 709

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When I try to memorize an English vocabulary, I try to write down the word and the meaning of it repeatedly. Continuous writing is hard, but it helps me to keep focusing on memorizing. And also, I always using material that is written in English as well. Rather than a study paper which is translated in Korean, I think it's more useful to understand intuitively.

The part of learning English that makes me confuse most is, grammar and lack of background knowledge such as cultural barrier compare to the native speaker. In grammar, there're lots of prepositions but in my point of view, as Korean, some of them look very similar so it makes me confuse. And in case of cultural barrier, it causes confusion in some situations. Since Korea has an honorific expression in all kinds of communication. So, when I interact with native speakers, I felt an unfamiliar way of talking from them. I just try to put 'please' in and out of sentences, but I'm not sure whether it's right or not.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

It's true that there are so many differences between English and Korean when it comes to the way we make use of words. ^^ 
Exposure to native speakers will be what helps you best in this situation. ^^ 
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts! 

~t. Ally


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When I try to memorize an English vocabulary, I try to write down the word and the meaning of it repeatedly. 
>> When I try to memorize English vocabulary, I try to write down the word and its meaning repeatedly.

Continuous writing is hard, but it helps me to keep focusing on memorizing. 
>> CORRECT!

And also, I always using material that is written in English as well. 
>> Also, I always use reading materials that are written in English.

Rather than a study paper which is translated in Korean, I think it's more useful to understand intuitively.
>> CORRECT!

The part of learning English that makes me confuse most is, grammar and lack of background knowledge such as cultural barrier compare to the native speaker. 
>> The most confusing part is grammar. It's also difficult because of the lack of background knowledge about the cultural aspect of the language.

In grammar, there're lots of prepositions but in my point of view, as Korean, some of them look very similar so it makes me confuse. 
>> In grammar, there're lots of prepositions but in my point of view, as a Korean, some of them look very similar so it makes me confused. 

And in case of cultural barrier, it causes confusion in some situations. 
>> And due to the cultural barrier, it causes confusion in some situations.
 
Since Korea has an honorific expression in all kinds of communication. 
>> CORRECT!

So, when I interact with native speakers, I felt an unfamiliar way of talking from them. 
>> CORRECT!

I just try to put 'please' in and out of sentences, but I'm not sure whether it's right or not.
>> CORRECT!
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