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Prevention is better than cure. What does this phrase mean, and do you agree?

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I believe this phrase indicates that prevent diseases from happening would be better than curing them afterward. I agree with this statement. The illness would influence and deteriorate the immune system somehow, and COVID is a suitable example to explain this. Some patients experience the aftereffect after suffering from COVID-19. This rule applies evenly to asymptomatic or severely ill patients. I read an article last week that a patient who suffered from a South Africa strain of COVID is suffering from olfactory hallucination, so he keeps smell something burning. Many doctors and scientists presume the symptom is from the ravaged immune system, and they are still experimenting to find the cure. In this way, I believe preventing disease is better than curing it afterward.

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I believe this phrase indicates that prevent diseases from happening would be better than curing them afterward. 
>>> I believe this phrase indicates that preventing diseases from happening would be better than curing them afterward.   
I agree with this statement. 
>>> correct  
The illness would influence and deteriorate the immune system somehow, and COVID is a suitable example to explain this. 
>>> correct  
Some patients experience the aftereffect after suffering from COVID-19. 
>>> correct  
This rule applies evenly to asymptomatic or severely ill patients. 
>>> correct  
I read an article last week that a patient who suffered from a South Africa strain of COVID is suffering from olfactory hallucination, so he keeps smell something burning. 
>>> correct  
Many doctors and scientists presume the symptom is from the ravaged immune system, and they are still experimenting to find the cure. 
>>> correct  
In this way, I believe preventing disease is better than curing it afterward.
>>> In this way, I believe preventing the disease is better than curing it afterwards.  

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