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Q:Do you believe in the saying; "sharing is caring"?
A:I believe it.
First, if I share something to someone then someone will happy because he or she get something.
Second, if I share something to someone then I feel proud so I think sharing is caring.
Last, if I share something to someone then someone can do something that I shared.

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Good Evening,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work Paul!

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)



Q: Do you believe in the saying; "sharing is caring"?

A: I believe it.
>>> I believe in it.
OR: I believe in this saying. 

First, if I share something to someone then someone will happy because he or she get something.
>>> First, if I share something with someone then he/she will be happy because he or she gets something.

Second, if I share something to someone then I feel proud so I think sharing is caring.
>>> Second, if I share something with someone then I'll feel good and proud so I think sharing is caring.

Last, if I share something to someone then someone can do something that I shared.
>>> Lastly, if I share something with someone then he/she can do something with the one that I have shared.

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