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Do you believe in superstitions? If yes, give me an example of superstition in Korea that you believ

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I don't believe it but my grandmother believe it so much. so when we moved out the house, she always ask monk when we moved out. this called "¼Õ ¾ø´Â ³¯ son-eobsneunnal". It means a day without demons. so it's a good day where no ghosts or demons do not wander around and cause no harm to humans. Even if it's more expensive to moving out the new house in that day, many people moved out in son-eobsneunnal day.

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Hi Tobby! Superstitions are actually part of a countries culture and tradition. It is passed through different generations. Some people believe it and some don't. It just depends on our perspectives. 

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I don't believe it but my grandmother believe it so much. 
>> I don't believe in those but my grandmother does so much. 

so when we moved out the house, she always ask monk when we moved out. 
>> When we move out of the house, she always ask for advise from a monk. 

this called "¼Õ ¾ø´Â ³¯ son-eobsneunnal". 
>> This is called "¼Õ ¾ø´Â ³¯ or son-eobsneunnal". 

It means a day without demons. 
>> It means, " A day without demons". 

so it's a good day where no ghosts or demons do not wander around and cause no harm to humans. 
>>So if it's a good day, that means there are no ghosts or demons wandering around that cause harm to humans. 

Even if it's more expensive to moving out the new house in that day, many people moved out in son-eobsneunnal day.
>> Even though it's expensive moving out, people still choose to do so because of "Son-eubsneunnal day".
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