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I love restaurant, because if I go to restaurant, I can eat a lot of food in there!, and also John's Restaurant is very good to! If you go here someday, you will say: "Oh my god, oh~my~god...it is so delicious!!", because I say this word to~,and here say: "John's restaurant is a very special place because every day John cooks different kinds of food". These means we can eat different kinds of food everyday! Italian, GReek, Chinese, Japanese, Korean, Mexican, American, we can eat food from all over the world.
So here is why I love John's Restaurant!

P.S. I have never been this John's Restaurant.
The picture is from Naver, that's some kind of restaurant in Europe, can you believe it?

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Happy Saturday Maria!

This is such a beautiful place. As you have described it right here, it seems to be very a regal place and that they serve super sumptuous food as well. I wish to go to John's place and meet John too as you do.

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I love restaurant, because if I go to restaurant, I can eat a lot of food in there!, and also John's Restaurant is very good to! 
>> I love restaurants, because if I go to the restaurant, I can eat a lot of food there! And also, John's Restaurant is very good too! 

If you go here someday, you will say: "Oh my god, oh~my~god...it is so delicious!!", because I say this word to~,and here say: "John's restaurant is a very special place because every day John cooks different kinds of food". 
>> If you go here someday, you will say: "Oh my god, oh~my~god...it is so delicious!!", because I said these words too. Here one can say: "John's restaurant is a very special place because every day, John cooks different kinds of food". 

These means we can eat different kinds of food everyday! Italian, GReek, Chinese, Japanese, Korean, Mexican, American, we can eat food from all over the world.
>> Correct!
Or: Greek

So here is why I love John's Restaurant!
>> Correct!

P.S. I have never been this John's Restaurant.
>> P.S. I have never been to John's Restaurant.

The picture is from Naver, that's some kind of restaurant in Europe, can you believe it?
>> Correct!
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