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What are the most annoying bad driving habits of other drivers in your country (/or this country /or compared to this country)?
The most bad driving habit of drivers is drunk driving. Of curse, it is illegar in not only Korea but also many other contry.
However, many drivers do not realize how dangerous it is. Sometimes, we can see the news that famous actors, singers or athletes cause drunk car accidents. People who are well known to populor should be more careful but someone think it is not serious. So, the goverment has improved the law to increase penalty. `

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Happy Monday, Ji Eun! indeed! It is really sad that many drivers do not take drunk driving seriously. Some people die because of it. I hope the government can make  better laws related to this. Thank you!-Faith-
What are the most annoying bad driving habits of other drivers in your country (/or this country /or compared to this country)?
>> CORRECT
The most bad driving habit of drivers is drunk driving. 
>> CORRECT
Of curse, it is illegar in not only Korea but also many other contry.
>> Of course, it is illegal not only in Korea but also in other countries.
However, many drivers do not realize how dangerous it is. 
>> CORRECT
OR Unfortunately, many drivers ignore its peril.
Sometimes, we can see the news that famous actors, singers or athletes cause drunk car accidents. 
>> Sometimes, we can see the news that famous actors, singers or athletes cause car accidents under the influence. 
People who are well known to populor should be more careful but someone think it is not serious. 
>> People who are well-known should be more careful but someone thinks it is not serious. 
So, the goverment has improved the law to increase penalty. `
>> So, the government has improved the law to increase penalty. `
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