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What¡¯s the best thing about your mom or dad? Are your parents flexible or strict?

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The best thing of my parents is that they haven't spared no effort to support me and I really appreciate their effort. For example, when I was a kid, I realized my house were not financially well off. But, my parents supported me especially when it comes to study. Also, my dad tries to drive me regardless of the distance whenever i go out because I have an appointment. So, I appreciate my parents' effort to caring me and loving me.
My dad used to be strict but now he became a flexible person. I think my mom is always flexible. My dad was a kind of conservative man. He didn't like that I traveled and stayed somewhere isn't house. But when I entered a university and lived in a dormitory, He seemed that he changed his mind. So, now he didn't care as much as he did that I come back home late or I travel for long days.

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The best thing of my parents is that they haven't spared no effort to support me and I really appreciate their effort. 
>> The best thing about my parents is that they have spared no effort to support me and I really appreciate their effort. 

For example, when I was a kid, I realized my house were not financially well off.
>> For example, when I was a kid, I realized my house was not financially well off.

But, my parents supported me especially when it comes to study. 
>> But, my parents supported me especially when it comes to studying. 

Also, my dad tries to drive me regardless of the distance whenever i go out because I have an appointment. 
>> Also, my dad tries to drive for me regardless of the distance whenever I go out or have an appointment. 

So, I appreciate my parents' effort to caring me and loving me.
>> So, I appreciate my parents' effort in caring for me and loving me.

My dad used to be strict but now he became a flexible person. 
>> CORRECT!

I think my mom is always flexible. 
>> CORRECT!

My dad was a kind of conservative man. 
>> CORRECT!

He didn't like that I traveled and stayed somewhere isn't house. 
>> He didn't like that I traveled and stayed in someone else's house. 

But when I entered a university and lived in a dormitory, He seemed that he changed his mind. 
>> But when I entered the university and lived in a dormitory, he seemed to change his mind about things.

So, now he didn't care as much as he did that I come back home late or I travel for long days.
>> So, now he doesn't care as much as he does before when I go home late or travel for long days.
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